I went out as staying inside was such a bore…
All I had was loads of wind & sunshine,
And then the entire world was fuckin mine...
I learnt so much, I unlearnt so much,
I did it all - see, feel & touch...
The mountains, the deserts, the sea,
I had so much fun in the open to dump & pee…
I wanted to fly, BoP gave me wings,
Since then we are the fuckin road kings...
Unlimited banter & unlimited fun,
It’s all about Beer, Bullet, Bakchodi & some pun...
It’s about bonhomie, it’s about brotherhood,
We are no Social Activists; we are no Robin Hood…
The Mighty One was always my partner in rhyme,
Riding & drinking is after all not such a big crime...
Miles to go before I take some rest,
There’s so much out there for me to test...
I wanna get back to where I belong,
And believe me it won’t take too long...
I would be out there on the roads very soon,
Till then have safe sex with that white balloon.
12 comments:
awesome dude really awesome specially the stanza -
i learnt so much i unlearnt so much
good effort hai ji. BOP ke saath kaafi achchaa waqt guzra hai. the best was the pushkar mela- maut ka kuan and circus Kya sahi tha :-)
Nice try>>>Likes those white balloons
Fucking awsome poetry jha bhai . .
liked this line so much : "And then the entire world was fuckin mine... "
your dalhousie ride cant get better words thn this , whn i read these lines , i could imagine u standing tall - sina cauda karke - wid THE MIGHTY ONE . .
"I wanna get back to where I belong,
And believe me it won’t take too long..."
kya baat hai.. send these over to RATM and maybe they cn make a song of this.. wud definitely dound good rapping!
One can feel the passion, pride and dedication in these lines.
Now, as usual, i'll write something negative. I dont agree with the title. The poem is about something else altogether.
@Ken - hahaha...i will have to agree...the poem isnt about the balloon, which incidentally is not just available in white...it comes in many colors and textures ;)
@Chotta Jha Sahib - badhiya hai, sir! taaliyaan, taaliyaan! covers all the emotions associated with being on the road...
nice......
OMG!!!!!!!!!Nishant...you said it all...and it even rhymes:):) well done!!!
the essence of ur biker soul is spilled in all the lines...but there is something more to it than riding.. don't get surprised if u r approached by RED RIBBON CLUB for an awareness campaign ;-)
Okay great...cos the rhyming reminds me of my school poems!And I like the white balloon angle..though agree with Dips.Poet Jha- This was one poem, reading which, I didnt get distracted. The line bout "dumping" is my FAVE!!!! ;))
Che Guevara on the Road: Night & Day ha ha ha...till then have safe sex with that white balloon:) you have become my FAV now:) hats off to you :)
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